2nd graders create nonfiction comics

Last week I visited Patana International School in Bangkok. During the week-long visit, I conducted writing workshops for grades 1 – 5.  In the 2nd-grade workshop, I focused on hooking the reader with a good lead and using strong verbs and vivid details. The subject of our writing was sea turtle hatchlings. My directions were simple: you are sea turtle hatchling, break free of your eggshell with your egg tooth, clamber to the surface and then dash to the sea and swim away. Whenever I have given this assignment in the past, students write wonderful pieces of prose with lots of active verbs and turtle-ly vocabulary. How surprised and overjoyed when I saw what one group of second graders produced. Inspired by writing about sea turtles, they created comic strips of the hatchling’s journey to the sea. So cool!

Check out the teacher’s blog of the experience:

This week we have been incredibly lucky to have a visit from
children’s author, photographer, and naturalist Steve Swinburne as
part of our Non-Fiction November.
In our session with Steve on Wednesday we were blown aware by not only
his passion for writing, but his fascination for wildlife. Steve lives in
Vermont, a state in the United States, and is fortunate enough to be
surrounded by an incredible landscape and wildlife. It is through nature
which he uses his experiences and facts about nature and wildlife and
transform them into beautiful story books that children love.

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The book he shared with us was TurtleTide, which told the story of sea turtles Screenshot 2019-11-22 09.55.16.png
coming to beaches to lay their eggs.

In the session with Steve we learnt the first things a writer needs to do is
“get it down and fix it up” a motivating phrase that enhances the need to get
your words out of your head, get them down on paper and then you can go
back, edit and fix them……mistakes are good!

Steve also shared with us the 3 important things to remember when writing, “If you, as a writer, have active verbs, cool details and a hook to grab the reader, you are halfway there to making your writing really sparkle.” This was something we
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Following this session we were inspired to take his non-fiction story of the
journey of the Turtle, and adding our own creativity to the concept and our
current learning on writing comics, we created our very own comic strips of
a turtle’s journey.

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3H were inspired by Steve’s energy, passion, poetry, and singing about how to
be a writer and our need as a world to understand and respect animals. We
look forward to our next visit to the library to search for his books!

 

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The Last Straw

After a long day at the office, Marvin Stone was enjoying a refreshing mint julep at his Washington, D.C. home. It wasn’t long before pleasure turned to disgust as Mr. Stone’s drinking tube, made from rye grass, turned to mush. His drink was ruined. The year was 1888. The way people drank their drinks was about to change.

The inventor in Marvin Stone set out to make a better drinking straw. He fashioned a thin tube by wrapping paper around a pencil, sliding out the pencil and applying glue to the ends of the paper. The modern straw was born!

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While people have sipped liquid from drinking tubes for thousands of years, it was Marvin Stone’s first paper tube that led to the invention of SO MANY KINDS OF STRAWS – plastic straws, bendy straws, jumbo straws, spoon straws, flexible straws. Some estimates say that Americans now use 500 million plastic straws a day!

Sometimes it seems like the plastic problem is too much, too overwhelming. What can I do when millions and millions of tons of plastic enter the oceans from rivers in places such as India and China?

Well, you can make a difference today, right where you live. If your family is eating out, REFUSE A STRAW. At home, SWITCH FROM A PLASTIC STRAW to a REUSABLE STEEL, GLASS, BAMBOO or PAPER STRAW.

 

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Today, 50% of plastic manufactured globally is single-use plastic, like the straws above. When it might take 500 years for a plastic straw to decompose, a metal straw with a safe, silicone tip is a better bet.    

One less plastic straw in the environment could save a sea turtle’s life.

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For one whole year, the author saved every piece of plastic he used. This obsession with plastic led him to ask why we love it so much and can we find a way to use it more wisely.

(this piece originally appeared in The Valley Green Journal)

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I am an immigrant.

I am an immigrant.

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Born in London, England. On the edge of the city where chimneys poked the grey sky, and brick three-story walkups crowded each other like weeds in a lot.

We lived at Seven Wolsey Road. No hot water. No indoor loo. On Saturday mornings Mum boiled water on the coal stove and filled a cooper tub. Us three kids scampered in, soaped each other’s backs and laughed.

Dad worked on a post office train sorting mail. He’d be gone for days. My mum guessed he had a little something down in Devon to take his mind off the kids, the bills, the struggle.

Mum worked in a factory sewing buttons on coats.

My grandmother — Dear Nan – hid the bottle of cheap gin under her pillow.

I mucked about in the streets with my best mate Dirty George. We swiped candy at Mary’s Sweet Shop. We chucked stones at neighborhood kids.

Once a rock whizzed out of the dark and sliced my upper lip, leaving a thin white scar.

America beckoned.

Dad went first. Then mum and three kids boarded the big ship Queen Elizabeth to sail to New York City.

I clutched the railing and stared open-mouthed. The Statue of Liberty. The Empire State Building. Thousands on the dock to welcome us.

We are all immigrants.

 

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Alligators Make the BEST Moms

I wish I’d met Louis Guillette.

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Lou was an internationally known research scientist and a passionate facilitator and advocate for science education from South Carolina. For over thirty years, he studied (and photographed) alligators and crocodiles in the wild. His research centered on the links between environmental contaminants and infertility and reproductive issues in alligator populations from Florida to South Carolina. “If the environment is not healthy for a baby alligator or a baby dolphin,” said Guillette, “It’s probably not healthy for us, either.” Lou showed that alligators act as a sentinel species for long-term health effects of environmental exposures, with many parallels to human development and lifespan. Colleagues used words like “extraordinarily enthusiastic” “inspirational force” “dedicated scientist” “charismatic” “funny” to describe Dr. Louis Guillette.

Sadly, Lou Guillette passed away in August 2015.

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Lou was gung-ho from the start when I first contacted him in April 2014 to do a kid’s book on alligators. “This is exactly the kind of thing I love working on,” he replied in his email. I’d proposed a book called The Alligator Scientist. After this upper elementary idea lost traction, I directed our collaboration to a younger audience.

I’d studied alligators as a backcountry wilderness ranger at Cumberland Island National Seashore in Georgia. I knew that American Alligators are A1 mothers. They use strong jaws of fearsome teeth to protect their young, sometimes for up to 2 years. Inspired by Lou’s amazing photographs, I wrote Alligators Make the BEST Moms.

While photographing crocodiles in South Africa, Lou and his team were often tracked by lions and charged by hippos. All in a day’s work, he would say. “Being a scientist is the four best jobs on Earth,” Lou Guillette said, “You are a detective, adventurer, an artist and storyteller.”

Lou never lived to see the efforts of our collaboration. I think he’d have been pleased.

I’ve got a grin as wide as a gator as I introduce my new book,  Alligators Make the BEST Moms.

 

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Grade level: K – 3rd grade

Paperback: 32 pages

Publisher: West River Press

$10, includes shipping and handling

To order a copy of Alligators Make the BEST Moms, please contact Heather Swinburne at swinburne.live@gmail.com

 

 

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Author visit to Shanghai American School

Secrets of the Trade 创作秘密

(Written by Mette Vanderheide)

2:36Earth is Best – S. Swinburne来自SAS上海美国学校

“Keep your eyes open and really look,” Steve Swinburne, the visiting author, tells our elementary school students. That’s his trade secret—how he comes up with the stories for his non-fiction books about animals. Next up, he shows a slide with a picture of his house. It’s covered in snow. He asks the first grade students “What do you see?” They are surprisingly quick to spot a beautiful white owl, blended in amongst the snow-capped trees. That’s when he lets them in on another one of his ‘trade secrets’: in order to be a successful writer, he has to use all five senses, which help him remain in tune with the natural world. That means he has to put his phone and computer down and focus on what is happening around him—outside.

“睁大眼睛看世界。”是访问作家史蒂夫·斯温伯恩(Steve Swinburne)赠予我校小学生的一句箴言,这也是他动物纪实故事书的创作秘密。接着,他向学生们展示了他的住所照片,图中可见房屋上覆盖着一层积雪,这时他转向一年级小学生:“你们都看到了什么?”孩子们出人意料地马上发现了与树顶的积雪融为一体的一只美丽白色猫头鹰,紧接着他又分享了另一个“创作秘密”:若想成为一名成功的作家,就必须充分利用五官感受世界,这一方法有利于他适应大自然,但这也就意味着他必须放下手机和电脑,专注于周围发生的事情——外界的一切。

At Shanghai American School, our librarians work year round to not only add to and retain the largest English library in China, but also make sure we bring in some of the most creative authors to talk to and work with our students. Kimbra Power, one of our librarians, told us that our librarians “are approached on a weekly basis by authors and illustrators from all over the world who want to come to SAS.” But they don’t just accept anyone who wants to come to our school.

“Our authors need to be creative and clever, not just good writers or illustrators. Some authors with best selling books are not naturally charismatic and will not be able to work with our students. Other authors may have written and published some lesser known books, but know how to present with incredible enthusiasm, stories, and research advice.” The most important trait about the visiting authors is not awards or being on a bestseller’s list (though many of the authors we bring in have these accolades), but that they can provide a valuable and unique example to our students.

According to Mrs. Power, having a wide variety of visiting authors is an “opportunity of a lifetime” for all of our students as it allows our community to connect with people from varied walks of life, with diverse backgrounds and stories to tell.

上海美国学校的图书管理员每年不仅致力于为我们这个中国最大的英文图书馆增添典藏,维护其藏书工作,而且还得确保请来最富创意的作家到我校为学生传业授课,与学生交流。我校图书管理员之一KimbraPower说“每周都有来自世界各地的作家和插画家联系我们的图书管理员想来上海美国学校”,但并不是所有人都能如愿以偿,还得经过一番筛选。“我校接受的访问作家必须富有创造力和聪明才智,不能单单是好作家或是插画家。

一些畅销作品的作家并不一定拥有与生具备的吸引学生的魅力,无法和学生有效的交流互动。另一些作家也许出版的书籍量不多或并不出名,但他们知道怎样以非同寻常的方式表达热情、呈现故事并提供研究建议。”访问作家最重要的特质不在于他/她所斩获的奖项,或其书籍是否畅销(尽管我校邀请的许多访问学者均获过此类殊荣),而是能给我校学生树立有价值的、独一无二的榜样。

Power女士表示接触各类访问作家对我校所有学生来说都是“一生难得的机遇”,因为这有助于学生群体与来自社会各界的人士接触,了解他们多姿多彩的背景和故事。

One of these diverse and enthusiastic authors, Mr. Swinburne, was recently working with our elementary school students. Mr. Swinburne told us that he “loves to talk with children about research and writing. I give them practical advice. ‘Hook the reader! Get it [your story] down and then fix it up!’ Those practical things are important. But I also would like to have them learn that they too can follow their dreams. I followed my dreams, even though I thought I could never earn a living as an author. I think it’s important to do what you love.”

Mr. Swinburne had many jobs before he finally was able to become a full time author. He drove trucks, delivered pizzas, was in a rock band, and even had a stint as a boat captain. But his passion for writing was with him throughout it all. He kept a journal of his journey and discoveries along the way, including all that he was seeing and learning about animals.

斯温伯恩先生就是这热情洋溢的多元化作家群体中的一员,最近由他为我校小学生讲课。斯温伯恩先生表示他“喜欢和孩子们分享研究和写作技巧,我常教给他们实用的建议,告诉他们要‘吸引读者!把【故事】写下来之后再进行润色!’这些实用性技巧非常重要。同时我也想让他们学会追逐梦想。我就实现了我的作家梦,尽管我从未想过我能靠写作谋生。做你喜欢的事非常重要。

”在成为全职作家前,他曾经从事过很多工作,包括卡车司机、披萨快递员、摇滚乐队乐手,甚至担任过船长,但他的写作热情从未退却。他一直保持着记日志的习惯,写下他沿途的发现,包括动物的见闻。

Our elementary students may not have the same opportunities to observe sea turtles, crocodiles, and the other amazing animals that Mr. Swinburne writes about so well, especially in such a large city that has more cement than grass. So how can they come up with great stories? According to Mr. Swinburne they can write excellent stories right here in Shanghai, they just have to grasp the “adventure in your heart,” turn it into an “adventure in your head,” and then write it down in their journal. The most important thing, he tells them, is for them to tell their own story. “Everyone has a story, it could be about basketball or a birthday party. Or about a friend. Believe in your own story, believe in yourself.”

我校小学生可能没有机会去观察海龟、鳄鱼和斯温伯格先生的笔下生动描绘的其他神奇动物,特别是生活在钢筋水泥架构的大城市中而非广阔自然天地中的孩子就更没有这种机会了。那么他们怎样才能创作出精彩的故事呢?斯温伯格先生说,孩子们在上海就能写出好故事,方法就是领会“心中的冒险历程”,并把它转化为“脑中的冒险之旅”,再写在日志中。他告诉学生讲述自己独一无二的故事至关重要。“每个人都有自己的故事,可以与篮球或生日聚会有关,或与一个朋友有关,你要相信你自己的故事,相信你自己。”

Not all of our students will become authors or illustrators, but it is important for them to be able to learn from and work alongside these incredible professionals. They are not just teaching them about how to write or draw, but how it is possible to be lifelong learners, to act with integrity and compassion in this world, and that they can courageously live out their dreams.

All of our visiting artists (writers, illustrators, mosaic artists, dancers, actors, etc.) live out our mission statement on a daily basis and show our students that the world is truly their oyster—they just need to stop and focus on their dreams and then go out and make it a reality.

 

不是所有学生都会成为作家或插画家,但重点在于他们能从才华洋溢的专业人士身上获得知识、学习进步。他们不仅向学生传授写作或作图技巧,而且教育他们怎样终身学习以及怎样以正直热情的方式勇敢地实现梦想。

我校所有访问艺术家(作家、插画家、马赛克艺术家、舞蹈家、演员等)每天都在践行着我校的使命宣言,并向学生展示这个世界会正真属于自己只要你能始于专注梦想,继而迈向实现梦想。

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China in January 2017

On the Road to Beijing

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When I was a kid I was told to finish my dinner because “children were starving in China.” We touched down in Beijing a week ago and all the children I’ve seen look pretty well fed. Thanks Mom and Dad for coercing me into eating that cold meatloaf.

Beijing is a busy, bustling city. We spend the first morning walking through Tiananmen Square, the site of the 1989 democracy protest. Ya’ll remember the iconic image of the guy standing in front of the tank.

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We walked under a picture of Chairman Mao, the size of a movie screen, and entered an archway leading to the Forbidden City. Here lie well-preserved palaces and temples from 24 emperors from the Ming and Qing dynasties that lived and worked in palatial splendor. The place was packed. The Chinese love their history

 

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2017-01-11-12-16-55The following day we taxied an hour and a half outside of Bejing to a section of the Great Wall of China called Mutianyu. The wall was first built in 550 and later reinforced around 1400. The Wall was built to keep out the likes of Genghis Kahn and his army of invading Mongols. It didn’t work. Genghis moved his troops into China in 1211.

 

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I’d watched a Smithsonian special about the wall before we flew to China. I learned that the strength and longevity of the Great Wall of China lies in the sticky rice that was used as its mortar.

Over 400,000 people perished in the construction of the wall. Apparently they left them where they died. So this place is not only a barricade, but a tomb as well. The great wall was called “the longest cemetery on earth.”

We could have ridden the cable car up from the parking lot to the mountain ridge and the Wall, but we climbed the billion steps. It was a grueling work as crows cawed from the skies above.

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We reached the top and explored the watchtowers and parapets for two hours taking selfies and imagining a horde of barbarians raining down on us from the north. I sharpened my dagger and held watch.

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We concluded our visit to Beijing with a duck dinner. Not any duck dinner. But Peking duck at Suji Minfu, the best place in Beijing to eat duck. Peking duck is glorious. They started roasting duck in China around 420, one of the main dishes in the imperial court. Now everyone can enjoy the thin, crisp skin and amazing meat eaten in a pancake with scallion, cucumber, sweet bean sauce. No one spoke English but that did not matter. Duck was the common denominator.

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At a nearby table three Chinese gents were feasting on duck and knocking back quantities of clear alchohol, maybe Chinese rice wine. They were happy and loud and looked at us and smiled. As we finished our meal and passed their table I said, “Ni hai” and shook their hands. They offered me a shot glass of their excellent rice wine. I drank it back to their great delight and with thumbs up we forged our very own U.S. – China détente.

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The Little Book That Could

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Happy Birthday to my new book – Safe in a Storm! It publishes today April 26, 2016.

Many thanks to Cartwheel Books and Scholastic Publishing! They did a wonderful job with the book. I’m over the moon with the book’s art! Jennifer A. Bell created beautiful, classic illustrations.

I call Safe in a Storm “the little book that could.” I never gave up on this story. And I felt like it never gave up on me, always tugging at my sleeve, as if nudging me to find it a home.

I wrote the rhyming couplets in late 2001, finishing the story in early 2002. For more than a decade, I’d submit the manuscript to editors, rejections would pile up, and I’d file the story away. Eventually, I’d dust it off and send it out again. Submission. Rejection. Submission. Rejection. On and on, for over 13 years, until an editor at Scholastic saw promise in this story of how animals find cozy places to keep their young safe and warm.

So…happy birthday Safe in a Storm! The story is dedicated “to teachers and school staff everywhere, who provide a safe harbor for children every day…in memory of the 20 Sandy Hook Elementary schoolchildren.”

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